Petal to Petal

from your pale blue eyes
down your cheeks, down
to your lips
where the sorrowful river leads to
and the banal taste
of the salty sea begins and ends,
there’s a place
where your sadness has learned to hide itself,

in a smile
like two red petals
drowning in the dewdrops of a crying morning

petal to petal,
if only my lips could touch yours
i could take
all the lonely droplets
away

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9 Comments on “Petal to Petal”

  1. Imagina says:

    very lovely and sensual, good job :)

  2. in a smile
    like two red petals
    drowning in the dewdrops of a crying morning

    beautiful…well done..Pete

  3. siubhan says:

    sad and sensual….lovely.

  4. buttercup600 says:

    Such a sadness in your words…all the lonely droplets away…loved it. Happy rally x

  5. h0ll0wd0ll says:

    Beautiful words expressing a beautiful sentiment. a gentle and sensitive poem.

  6. ladyg83 says:

    petal to petal, great imagery

  7. Jingle says:

    visit poets back please,
    thanks.
    Happy Monday!


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