Petal to Petal
Posted: July 31, 2010 Filed under: poetry 9 Comments »from your pale blue eyes
down your cheeks, down
to your lips
where the sorrowful river leads to
and the banal taste
of the salty sea begins and ends,
there’s a place
where your sadness has learned to hide itself,
in a smile
like two red petals
drowning in the dewdrops of a crying morning
petal to petal,
if only my lips could touch yours
i could take
all the lonely droplets
away
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very lovely and sensual, good job
cute!
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nice =]
in a smile
like two red petals
drowning in the dewdrops of a crying morning
beautiful…well done..Pete
sad and sensual….lovely.
Such a sadness in your words…all the lonely droplets away…loved it. Happy rally x
Beautiful words expressing a beautiful sentiment. a gentle and sensitive poem.
petal to petal, great imagery
visit poets back please,
thanks.
Happy Monday!